assuming you're deleting earlier duplicate posting, so re-posting this comment: VO makes a huge difference, but there is a problem with the audio levels: you need either to reduce the music sound level or increase the VO volume. I'll give you the opportunity to do that on the day we're back if you email to confirm you'll do this, and delaying marking this til then if so. Some of the higher notes around 1:15-1:30 are a bit distracting so if you can replace any of those too you should. Works well overall, though there certainly could be more of the love triangle and a greater variety of scenes. Quite long as a teaser trailer so make sure you reference specific lengths matching this of existing teaser trailers
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ReplyDeleteassuming you're deleting earlier duplicate posting, so re-posting this comment:
ReplyDeleteVO makes a huge difference, but there is a problem with the audio levels: you need either to reduce the music sound level or increase the VO volume. I'll give you the opportunity to do that on the day we're back if you email to confirm you'll do this, and delaying marking this til then if so. Some of the higher notes around 1:15-1:30 are a bit distracting so if you can replace any of those too you should.
Works well overall, though there certainly could be more of the love triangle and a greater variety of scenes. Quite long as a teaser trailer so make sure you reference specific lengths matching this of existing teaser trailers